SBI PO Descriptive - Letter to the Branch Manager enquiring about the services available for your start-up

Hello and welcome to exampundit . We rolled out the SBI PO Descriptive Contest a few days back and we got a lot of responses. We will be publishing the BEST of the Lot. But that does not mean, your one was Bad. The topic "Write a letter to the Branch Manager enquiring about the services available for your start-up" is aced by Domino.

A-21, DC Apartment
Sector 10
New Delhi – 110075
Date: 14th July, 2016

The Branch Manager
Dwarka Branch
New Delhi – 110075

Respected Sir,
Sub:  Information about the services available for startups.

I am one of the customers of your esteemed bank and I have recently come across an article on a national daily regarding your bank offering services to the emerging startup companies. I have an online business which I would like to expand and the start up platform serves the purpose best.

Your bank is one of the most trusted entities in the country which is the sole reason of me asking for your kind assistance. My business encompasses around ethnic clothing for women and I have attached the revenue model as well as the financial turnover with this letter. I hope this will help you to provide me a better insight into the services which I can avail through your bank.

I will be obliged if you can revert to my letter at earnest with the particulars I am seeking.

Yours faithfully,



Now note very carefully,

Here we asked you to write a letter to the manager asking about the services for your start up. However, most of the entries stated a few common things, 1) I am from poor family/low caste or 2) I want to start my business or 3) I am jobless so want to start a business. These are not something you should be writing

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