Solutions - 'Look much nice' should be replaced with 'look very nice'.It should should be noted that very is used to modify Adjectives and past participles used as Adjectives.
I am very hungry. (Adjective)
I am very interested in music.
|Solutions - Another' is an indefinite determiner which means an additional person or thing. The use of 'one' after it is superfluous.|
Solutions - 'Almost a hour' should be replaced with 'almost an hour' because 'h' of hour is Pronounced with vowel-sound.
For example, Ram is a honest man. (x)
Ram is an honest man. (✓)
|Solutions - 'You stay' should be replaced with "you on staying', because 'insist is always followed by preposition 'on'. For example, She will insist on getting up early and playing her radio very loud|
|Solutions -'So bad' should be replaced with 'so badly'. Bad is an adjective and its Adverbial form is badly.|
The accident damaged his car bad.(x)
The accident damaged his car badly.(✓)
|Solutions - 'It is more better' should be replaced with 'it is better'. The use of double comparatives is wrong. For example.|
He is more better than Ram. (x)
He is better than Ram. (✓)
He is much better than Ram. (✓)
|Solutions - The word 'deter' is followed by preposition 'from'. Therefore, 'women from having' is the correct use.|
What is the best way to deter young people from taking up smoking ?
|Solutions - 'As best as' should be replaced with 'as best'. The idiom 'as best one can' means not perfectly but as well as one is able to. For example, the facilities were not ideal but we managed as best we could.|